概要： Nevertheless， the completion of the gene map is just the initial step of the entire genetic research。 What will this step mean to us? A scientist once made an analogy， it is just like that you are faced with a version of The Collected Works of Shakespeare in which there is no punctuation mark， no space between words，and what's more， you cannot understand English at all! What will happen with genetic tech in hundreds of years is quite beyond our current perception。 B
Decoding of Genes: Hope or Dread?-基因破译:希望还是害怕?,Dec,标签：希望的作文,新学期新希望作文,http://www.67jx.comNevertheless， the completion of the gene map is just the initial step of the entire genetic research。 What will this step mean to us? A scientist once made an analogy， it is just like that you are faced with a version of The Collected Works of Shakespeare in which there is no punctuation mark， no space between words，and what's more， you cannot understand English at all! What will happen with genetic tech in hundreds of years is quite beyond our current perception。 But one thing we should always bear in mind， science is for the welfare of human being。 So I believe genetic tech will bring us a better tomorrow， although we may come across much hardship on the tortuous road leading to this goal。
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基因破译的新闻引起了世界的哗然。这一事实意味着什么?它给社会的伦理、道德将带来怎样的冲击?没有人能预知未来，而这一基因学的硕果将造福人类，还是带给人类一场浩劫?这也是对人性的考问。
文章的论题对于普通读者来说是晦涩难懂的，冒雯雯同学恰当地采用了例证的手法来阐述基因学这一发现的意义。而一个未知领域往往带给人困惑和恐惧。冒雯雯同学在文章中大篇幅的发问正是这种困惑的表达。第四段由8个问句构成，其中前六个问句指出了人类将要面对的六种困惑，后两个问句概括论述指出，“Are we nothing but genes?Or do we have something more than that?Such ethical and psychological puzzles will continue to haunt the humansociety．”文章多处采纳问句的表达方式，使论述有力，发人深省，震撼读者的心。
文章在结尾用一个恰当的比喻来解释基因学的发现，使原本晦涩难懂的基因学，以形象、贴切、易理解的方式被表达出来，也是文章的点睛之笔。
(点评教师：卢爱华)